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Thursday, April 24, 2008

PREY or Predator by ss (bestactor24)

In the forest of Stokes, School of Conservation, a female eagle was perched on top of the highest branch of the tallest tree. She thought of the world and fellow animals her babies for she had none of her own. Just as every mom would do any animal would have full respect and be cared for. Every animal looked up to her and respected her besides the food she eats, the mice.

One day a forest ranger came along to find a helpless mouse laying on the ground squealing and seeing the bones on the stomach of the hallow belly. The forest ranger gasped and ran to the mouse in the horrifying site. Although the eagle flew to the mouse picked it up by the back and flew away. The eagle had a tempting urge to try to eat the mouse but already had a good meal so decided to stay off for a couple hours. In the deserted cave eagle put down the mouse. "What is your name little mouse", said eagle while offering a fish. The mouse looked at the slimy disgusting fish. He pushed away the fish and mumbled, "W-w-well I d-don't have a n-n-name. My m-mommy is missing. She went to a dumpster for an evening snack and to get me something. She always goes there. "Aww you must be scared and hungry. I'll take care of you", said eagle, "call me Mama Eagle. We'll find your mom and return you to your mom”. The mouse and Mama Eagle play together and had a good time.

Mama Eagle called the mouse “Titan” for the brave courage’s, spirit. Although Mama Eagle had a quick flash back of the lunch she gulped down with a squirmy tail sticking out of her mouth, a muse near the dumpster. She felt awful. Then again it was her food supply. Was it Titans mom?

Mama Eagle came home to a raving mouse with a group of rats and mice. All had a rope that had a hairy figure, Poison Ivy. Mama Eagle tried to fly away but all the rodents were surrounding her. Everybody threw the rope on her and strapped her to the ground. Titan left her there even all the rodents. Mama eagle broke the vine with a thundering snap in a second. She knew Titan found out some how. Trying to fly away Mama Eagle saw a spot of red not allowing her to fly as fast as she could so he went to the nearest shelter he could find and pecked at the window. Softly the eagle’s strength was being taken right from her. She slowly fell to the ground. A forest ranger happened to be walking and spotted the eagle. As the eagle woke up the red spot was gone but she was in a weird crate. When a human took out the eagle there was an audience of young people staring and blinding him with blight flashes. She wasn’t so interested though. A mouse was sitting in another weird crate. It was Titan. The look on his face was horrible. Until that day the eagle has always been eating her food instead of playing with it.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

i liked your story ss.

backflip2396 said...

Your story was good. I liked the detial in the first paragraph, but in the last paragraph, where did Mama Eagle go?? Oh and after some talks, I think it's supposed to be a new paragraph.

Anonymous said...

ss were did the mother eagle went to, did she went to build a new nest.

~An0nym0usb0b~ said...

ss, that ws a good, but grousome story. Where did the Mama Eagle go, and was the look on Titan's face anger at Mamma Eagle, fear, or sadness? I like that you have a moral to your story.

Anonymous said...

good story I liked how the mouse was so scared he couldn't say a word.

btbtbtbt said...

I loved that story!!! Great job ss(bestactor24)