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Monday, April 28, 2008


Once there was a rabbit named Hopper. He has a best friend named Thumper he is also a rabbit. One-day Hopper went to Thumpers house because they were going to get some carrots in the forest. When they were walking into the forest, right across the street from Thumper’s house, Hopper stop look he said, “there are a lot of carrots over there”. Hopper loves carrots, he loves how the out side is orange and when he bites into the carrot it is crunchy, that is his favorite part. Right when they ran to get the carrots the lion said, “don’t touch my carrots but, they said, “ you don’t even like carrots”, but the lion didn’t care. If the rabbits have them then he has to have them. The rabbits got mad and said” you don’t like carrots we like so just give us the carrots and know one will get hurt”. The lion didn’t like their tone so the lion was angry his face got so red it look like a really big cherry. The lion said ”if you pay me 12 dollars for 15 carrots there all yours”. The rabbit like that idea so the rabbits gave the lion 15 dollars. The lion and the rabbits were happy, but when the word got out that Hopper and Thumper paid lion for carrots it was bad. Two days after the day when the rabbits paid the lion, which was Monday every-one herd that lion tricked the rabbits to pay the lion for the carrots. When Hopper and Thumper herd lion tricked them they got mad. Hopper went right over to Thumpers house and said, ”did you know that lion trick use, and we gave him money. Hopper and Thumper went right over to lions house and guess what lion was sacred he didn’t want to get in trouble. That didn’t stop Hopper and Thumper. They ran right over to lions house and Hopper and Thumper rang the doorbell. Lion answered the door, and ask “what”, hopper said, “You trick us, why did you do that”? Lion said, “ I just needed money to help my nephew, it is his birthday in 5 days, and he wants to get him a big gift from me. Thumper said, ” you should have just ask us, it would have not been a problem”. Lion said, "He didn't know that he could do that". But lion apologize and was truly sorry, so what lion did was you could come to my nephew party. Hopper said, ”that would be great”, so Hopper and Thumper went to the party and had a great time. Lion, Thumper, and Hopper were all great friends. They never lied to each other again, and were always telling the truth.

The End


hamilTron said...

Hey Guys!!!!!
What a cool story!!!!!
I just got a question.
What do you think about the news?
Do you think big companies like CNN and ABC and NBC tell you the truth.
I think the news exaggerates their stories.
For example,
Chaos in an airport as a lady comes into a plane and tries to kill someone.
On Radio NZ
It's just fine no chaos.
We just had to wait in our car.
Which one do you think is right?
Post your ideas.
And please visit my blog. Please.


hamilTron said...

Hey Mr Teehan and your class.
Did someone from your class make this story? Just tell me in there blog name. DOn't wanna say your name on the net.
I think it's really cool.
Here's a question.
What types of famous authors in America, New Jersey State?

JT said...

Heyy this is JT, yes I made this story,I am in Mr.T class. A famous author how about a book its called Junie B. Jones and some Sneaky Peeky Spying, and the author name is Barbara Parks, alot of people read her books. I really like her books, I think they are very good.

IM A ROOM5IAN said...

hello! i like the story and the moral of it. maybe you could use paragraphs to make it easier and more interesting to read?

Nadine said...

Hi Mr Teehan!
I am Nadine from the 08 Allstars ( ) in Australia. I saw your comment from Alex's blog and wanted to visit.
I really enjoyed the story JI wrote! Well done. That was really entertaining!! I loved the bit where the lion said they had to pay 15 dollars to get the carrots. But i feel sorry for Thumper and the other one, that they were tricked! It wasn't Lion's fault though, he wanted to raise money to buy his daughter/son or nephew/niece a present for their birthday. That bit made me sad!
But other than that, the story was fantastic! I am glad it had a happy ending!! Great writing JI!!
Anyway, you can visit my blog and hopefully comment! I'll be looking forward to it.

Nadine said...

Hi again Mr Teehan!
Sorry, here is the real address for my class in Australia.
Hope you visit so that my class and yours will become friends. And also, I'd love to hear some comments from your class students too if they could visit my blog?
Thanks and bye!!

Nadine said...

By the way, if you couldn't get to my blog, here is my blog address:
Hope you visit!!

kitty milo said...

thats an awesome story with good description but it's kinda hard to read not in paragraphs.
this is another cool story that you can ask mr woody about:
I like monkeys.

The pet store was selling them for five cents a piece. I thought that
odd since they were normally a couple thousand each. I decided not to
look a gift horse in the mouth. I bought 200. I like monkeys.

I took my 200 monkeys home. I have a big car. I let one drive. His
name was Sigmund. He was retarded. In fact, none of them were really
bright. They kept punching themselves in their genitals. I laughed.
Then they punched my genitals. I stopped laughing.

I herded them into my room. They didn't adapt very well to their new
environment. They would screech, hurl themselves off of the couch at
high speeds and slam into the wall. Although humorous at first, the
spectacle lost its novelty halfway into its third hour.

Two hours later I found out why all the monkeys were so inexpensive:
they all died. No apparent reason. They all just sorta' dropped dead.
Kinda' like when you buy a goldfish and it dies five hours later. Damn
cheap monkeys.

I didn't know what to do. There were 200 dead monkeys lying all over my
room, on the bed, in the dresser, hanging from my bookcase. It looked
like I had 200 throw rugs.

I tried to flush one down the toilet. It didn't work. It got stuck.
Then I had one dead, wet monkey and 199 dead, dry monkeys.

I tried pretending that they were just stuffed animals. That worked for
a while, that is until they began to decompose. It started to smell real

I had to pee but there was a dead monkey in the toilet and I didn't want
to call the plumber. I was embarrassed.

I tried to slow down the decomposition by freezing them. Unfortunately
there was only enough room for two monkeys at a time so I had to change
them every 30 seconds. I also had to eat all the food in the freezer so
it didn't all go bad.

I tried burning them. Little did I know my bed was flammable. I had to
extinguish the fire.

Then I had one dead, wet monkey in my toilet, two dead, frozen monkeys in
my freezer, and 197 dead, charred monkeys in a pile on my bed. The odor
wasn't improving.

I became agitated at my inability to dispose of my monkeys and to use the
bathroom. I severely beat one of my monkeys. I felt better.

I tried throwing them way but the garbage man said that the city wasn't
allowed to dispose of charred primates. I told him that I had a wet
one. He couldn't take that one either. I didn't bother asking about the
frozen ones.

I finally arrived at a solution. I gave them out as Christmas gifts. My
friends didn't know quite what to say. They pretended that they like
them but I could tell they were lying. Ingrates. So I punched them in
the genitals.

I like monkeys
sorry that was such a long comment=]
found at:
Kitty Milo

Anonymous said...

Heyy thanks for saying you like my story, is that a story you made up? If so I like it.


Intrepid Tiger said...

There seems to be a few spelling mistakes in there but great story. :D

MrWoody said...

Ahoy there New JErsey-ites!
We hear you finish school in the middle of the year. How odd. We finish in December just before xmas.
Anyway, we ar every sorry that we are not able to keep up with your technical expertise. We have not worked out how to do anything flash like skyping or podcasting.
However, we have made some low quality mp4 videos on our cell phone and have emailed them to Mr Teehan. Check us out! We shall think of you having holidays while we are at school throughout our winter.
Ka kite ano!

kitty milo said...

hi new jersiy-ites!!!
we have just posted a video of us saying "hello" and saying our names. please come visit it. i do the peace sign at the start. byebye

nicky57 said...

It was a good story but you might want to split them into paragraghs so it will be easyer to read.