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Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Happy Birthday Snail! by GN

“Happy birthday Snail! What o you want to do today go to the park, come to my house , or see a movie?” said Penguin[Snail’s brother]. “Oh I don’t know lets go for a walk.” Snail suggested. “No that is stupid!” Penguin shouted!

“As the two brothers argue the door bell rings dig dong. “I got it!” said Snail. Snail opened the door it was Beaver. “Hey Beaver what brings you here?” Snail asked. “I came to say happy birthday, well happy birthday well bye!” Beaver rushed. “No stay we are trying to find out what to do I wan to go for a walk and Penguin thinks that is stupid!” Snail demeaned.

“Is that true Penguin?” Beaver asked “Well yeah going for a walk is stupid.” answered Penguin. “But it is Snail’s birthday he should get to pick.” said Beaver. Penguin walked up to Snail and said “I am sorry it is your birthday you should get to pick what to do.”

So the three of them went for a walk and lived happily ever after!!!!!!

4 comments:

backflip2396 said...

In the first paragraph is that o supposed to be do???

Anonymous said...

i no typo

Anonymous said...

Why didn't penguin get something bigger for Snail if he thought a walk is stupid???????

Anonymous said...

Good story but there is a typo